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Discord's Revenge 6 by ViralJP Discord's Revenge 6 by ViralJP
Twilight Sparkle (c) Hasbro
Princess Luna (c) Hasbro
Princess Celestia (c) Hasbro
Spike (c) Hasbro
Apple Bloom (c) Hasbro
Sweetie Belle (c) Hasbro
Scootaloo (c) Hasbro
Cheerilee (c) Hasbro
Discord (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
(c) :iconfyre-flye:

Upon the whole fiasco that occurred within the library being resolved, Twilight Sparkle and Princess Luna decided not to waste any more time. They discussed their plan of action with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, but only in quick general details.

Twilight Sparkle: Princess Luna and I will go and find the other ponies while you three stay here and watch over Miss Cheerilee.
Apple Bloom: What about Spike and Princess Celestia?
Princess Luna: I shall be taking my sister with me in order to keep her close by. Spike shall also accompany us as well.
Princess Celestia: *giggles*
Sweetie Belle: But can't we help out too?
Twilight Sparkle: We can't risk you three and Cheerilee being in danger, especially with Discord on the loose.
Scootaloo: But you're a filly too, just like us! *anger in tone*
Twilight Sparkle: Please, listen to me. We can't risk putting all of you in jeopardy.
CMC: ...... Fine. *disappointed*
Cheerilee: abababa.
Princess Luna: Let us go Twilight Sparkle.
Twilight Sparkle: Yes Princess, ready Spike?
Spike: Right behind you! *follows close by while carrying the filly Princess Celestia*

As soon as the group exited out of the library, a sudden flash appeared before them. At that moment, Discord made his entrance and laughed while juggling the hourglass in his hands.

Discord: Hello my little ponies! Enjoying the chaos today?
Twilight, Luna, & Spike: DISCORD!!!!!
Princess Celestia: *looks at Discord with curiousity*
Discord: Awww, you're so adorable Celestia. *waves and laughs at Celestia's misfortune*
Discord: Oh my, pot calling the kettle black much? If I recall, you yourself were quite a fiend back when your "other half" was in control. Isn't that right Luna?
Princess Luna: Grrrrgh *anger ensues*
Twilight Sparkle: What did you do to my friends!?
Discord: Silly Twilight, like you don't know already. *flicks at Twilight's horn* All I did was use this handy little hourglass and turn you, your friends, and numerous ponies throughout Equestria into young harmless fillies, colts, and even foals. However, I did turn some oppositions over at Canterlot into old colts and aged mares for some quick kicks MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Discord: Oh please Luna, like I would ever tell where they are and ruin things. *snaps his fingers* Actually, that's why I'm here. I have a new game for you to play Twilight. *points at Twilight*
Twilight Sparkle: WHAT!?
Discord: That's right! The rules for this new game of mine are quite simple. All you have to do is find your friends. Once they're found, you and your friends must reach the statue by town hall. You'll have only ONE hour to do all this.
Twilight Sparkle: ... That's fine by me.
Discord: Oh, I almost forget to mention. Aside from using it to help recover your friends, you CANNOT use your magic to simply teleport yourself or any other pony to the statue. Also, you are not allowed any help from anyone or anypony during this game. This goes for the Princess and your assistant here. Alongside those rules, anything else goes.
Twilight Sparkle: Alright, but you have to put everything back to normal and go back to your stone imprisonment if we win.
Discord: Very well, but if I win then I get to do whatever I want to 6 ponies of my choice. What do you say?
Twilight Sparkle: I accept your terms.
Discord: Wonderful, with that said the game begins ... NOW!
*Discord vanishes in a blinding flash*

Without further moments of hesitation, Twilight rushed off on her own in the hopes of finding the other ponies and defeating Discord at his own game. Spike looks upon her sudden departure with worry along with Princess Luna and Princess Celestia.

Spike: We can't let go off by herself!
Princess Luna: We must. Discord possesses the hourglass. Our interference would endanger the ponies and ourselves. We would also fall victim to mystical properties of time itself.
Spike: Well what can we do?
Princess Luna: ... Let us go to Canterlot Castle.
Spike: Why there?
Princess Luna: We must retrieve the elements of harmony in the likely chance that Discord may go back on his word.
Spike: But we can't help Twilight right now remember?
Princess Luna: I know, but we are not helping her in this challenge. We are only providing assistance once the game is finished.
Spike: Ah, I see where you're getting at. *places Celestia onto Luna's back and rides aboard also*
Princess Luna: Let us depart.

Upon their departure, Apple Bloom sat close by the window. She saw the entire thing and worried about Twilight and the others.

Sweetie Belle: What did you see Apple Bloom?
Apple Bloom: I saw that weird creature statue!
Scootaloo: You mean that freaky statue thing!?
Cheerilee: Ahba.
Apple Bloom: Yeah, but it was alive and talking to the others. After that, it disappeared and everypony left.
Scootaloo: With us left out to wait!?
Sweetie Belle: Now what do we do?
Apple Bloom: Hmmm, I got it!
Sweetie Belle & Scootaloo: What!?
Apple Bloom: Zecora! She can help us! Maybe she can make some kind of potion that could turn everypony back to normal!
Scootaloo: Yeah! Zecora can probably make a real mean magic spell that'll teach that Dracon-a-thingy a lesson!
Sweetie Belle: Well what are we waiting for? Let's go and see her right away!
Cheerilee: Yah! *giggles*

The Cutie Mark Crusaders leave the library with Cheerilee. Their main concern is now going to Zecora and possibly creating a potion that'll help everypony.
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I'd like to say that, first, I personally think this piece has the best story to it out of all the ones I've read so far (I'm reading them in order.). Also, I love the look on Celestia's face, it's just the opposite of her, and how you keep the oversized jewelry. The reason I gave it a 4.5 Technique Is because of the HourGlass. It just looks off, being on his should at that weird angle. Other than that it's all great. Well, I'm off to read the next one...Gotta make some filler...Winter Wrap-Up, Winter Wrap-Up, let's finish our Holiday cheer...
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boogerejean Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014

Also, I'm guessing Doctor Whooves might be immune to Discord's hourglass (he is the closest thing Equestria has to a Time Lord after all), and, if he shows up, probably just orders Discord to get back to bothering other ponies (since Doctor Whooves is, at the moment, trying to keep the fabric of space and time from collapsing into a rip the exact size of Belgium created by Discord's abuse of time).

PS, I'm guessing this story comes before the events of "Keep Calm and Flutter On", since Discord is evil in this series, from what I can tell...


Let's do the Time Warp again!!!

boogerejean Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014

This is not going to end well...


Let's do the Time Warp again!!!

Silverumbreon101 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WHY DISCORD!!!! WHY!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!!??????? Fear OMG Fear OMG Fear OMG Fear OMG Fear OMG Fear OMG Fear 
newsuperdannyzx Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
why not luna defeat discord herself by her powerful magic
Kittiepurrie Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Cheerilee: abababa.
Hahahahaha thats so cute! I love this story! Keep it up! :)
DripDropBoom Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
the only thing that remotely annoys me about twilight in these sort of situatuions is that she's to stubborn to let anypony else but herself tory and help her.
johannchristopherg9 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Artist
Power to reverse time and make people younger.
FallenFang101 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Aww :D Tiny Twilight!
wow totally cuet
rainbowdashlover90 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Artist
baby celestia awwwww
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