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Discord's Revenge 4 by ViralJP Discord's Revenge 4 by ViralJP
Princess Luna (c) Hasbro
Princess Celestia (c) Hasbro
Apple Bloom (c) Hasbro
Sweetie Belle (c) Hasbro
Scootaloo (c) Hasbro
Cheerilee (c) Hasbro
Derpy Hooves (c) Hasbro
Discord (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
(c) :iconfyre-flye:

After Discord's arrival at the school, Ponyville underwent a drastic change (the same change that occurred when he first made Ponyville fall into chaos). Upon Discord's departure from the school, the Cutie Mark Crusaders went to the school while unaware of the events that have taken place. They found a crying foal in the classroom and soon realized that it was their teacher. They took the helpless foal with them in order to find any pony that could help, but as soon as they left the school the crusaders saw the drastic and unnatural changes made to the town. However, Discord was expecting their arrival at the school, yet decided not to intrude ... for now.

With little Cheerilee alongside them, the crusaders start heading back to town, but the checker board ground and floating houses distracted them. Their reactions to the strange changes to the environment were those of shock, awe, and terror.

Apple Bloom: What happened to Ponyville!?
Sweetie Belle: Maybe some kind of spell did this.
Scootaloo: *carrying Cheerilee* I kind of doubt a spell could do all this mess. Either way, it looks really weird.
Cheerilee: *starts crying* WAAAAAAAA!!!!
Scootaloo: *tries to calm Cheerilee* I just hope we can find some pony who could change Ms. Cheerilee back.
Sweetie Belle: *helps Scootaloo with Cheerilee* Don't worry Ms. Cheerilee, we'll help you some how.
Apple Bloom: *worried* I wish Applejack and them were here. They'd know what to do.

While stumped with their problems, an alicorn suddenly appears before the crusaders. Another alicorn that was small but familiar leaped off the other's back and onto the ground. The crusaders soon noticed who these alicorns are.

Apple Bloom: Princess Luna!
Scootaloo: What are you doing here? *puts Cheerilee down on the ground*
Sweetie Belle: And who's that small pony?
Princess Luna: I'm afraid thy sister has been inflicted by a spell casted upon her. Princess Celestia is but a mere young filly now.
Apple Bloom: Wait! That's Princess Celestia!? *takes a look at Princess Celestia from Luna's side* Oh my gosh! It is her!
Princess Celestia: *starts chewing on Luna's mane again*
Sweetie Belle: Princess Luna, you think that whoever did this to Princess Celestia did the same to Cheerilee?
Princess Luna: It certainly seems that.
Scootaloo: Who did this then? OW! *has her tail chewed on by Cheerilee*
Princess Luna: Discord.
Apple Bloom: Wait a sec, you mean that goofy lookin' statue we saw on our field trip to Canterlot Castle?
Princess Luna: Yes, but thou must know that the one named Discord is not just a statue, but an actual living spirit of disharmony and chaos.
Scootaloo: Oh yeah, Ms. Cheerilee said it was something called a Draconequis or something. OW! *Cheerilee still chewing on Scootaloo's tail*
Sweetie Belle: What do we do now princess?
Princess Luna: Thou must assist me in finding Twilight Sparkle and her friends. With their help and the powers of the elements of harmony, we can defeat Discord and return every pony and everything back to normal.
Apple Bloom: You got it princess!
Sweetie Belle: You can count on us!
Scootaloo: That Discord won't know what's coming to him! OW! *Cheerilee still at Scootaloo's tail*

Not to far away, a young Derpy Hooves flies by with a lunch bag on top of her head. Suddenly, a face appears on the front of the bag. The face that showed up was none other than Discord.

Discord: Well now, looks like there's going to be a new game for the ponies to play really soon. I'll simply wait until they meet with Twilight. After that, the real fun begins.
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Th3iPoDM0N Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Okay....why is a bag carrying Derpy away?
ajaxtheemopony Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Again... XD
OkamiJubei Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
*LOLed at Derpy*
CareDuck Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Little sisters become big sisters
pikachulover94 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
awesome and to cute!
Silverumbreon101 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Baby Celestia is so cute Woohooooo! 
Snowpup22 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
yay, derpy!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
So scoots, how does it feel to have your mane being painfully chewed on by your alternate universe sister?
1Elementofhope Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeh, reeeaaaaalllllll good camouflage discord
Metagrossfreak Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Even better: Discord makes Luna, Celestia, and Cadance fillies, thus being too young to rule (like in adventure time). Doctor Whooves and Derpy must lead Equestria with their knowledge of Space-Time and Muffins!
TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the plot how it already is. I also don't understand the fan base developing Derpy when it's Hasbo's job to develop characters.
Metagrossfreak Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the Fanon is often considered when writing the Canon
TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
I guess. With Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash becoming sisters, I love the idea because it shows 2 characters who are properly introduced, judging by episodes we already know and not background ponies to begin with. Sure, Scootaloo cameoed in the 1st episode, but I'm going to overlook that because the fan base didn't start coming up with a random personality before she was properly established in later episodes.

With Disty Doo, that's the fan base doing something to a pony that only exists because of an animation error. I mean, really? Are we really meant to believe she is obsessed with muffins, the mail pony, married to Time Turner, and has Dinky Doo as her daughter? I don't buy that. I'm sorry.
Metagrossfreak Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't buy everything about Derpy either, but let's look at what is fact:
-Her first line in the show was "mmm, muffins"
-Her Saddlebag has a muffin on it
-She was helping at a delivery company when she dropped that piano on Twilight
-She went to the movies with Doctor Whooves as seen in "One Bad Seed"

but, you are right, everything else is just speculation
TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
The Doctor was with Cloudkicker in the movies. I haven't seen Disty Doo with a muffin saddlebag. She could have volunteered and then gone back to her other job, which I think has something to do with bubbles because as said in 'Call Of The Cutie', your cutie mark represents your talent. And I don't think she is obsessed with muffins. She probably just likes them.
Metagrossfreak Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
May I first say, this conversation is very fun :)
I agree, a muffin obsession is unlikely. Derpy Hooves has a muffin saddle bag in "Put your Hoof Down", where she is seen in the market place.
As for the cutie mark. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon then have the words talents then: being born rich. Although I don't approve of the Time Turner and Derpy fan pairing, in the fan video "Doctor Whooves and Assistant" [link] Derpy suggests the bubbles represent her bubbly personality (hence why she is always happy looking). Doctor Whooves replies that he thought is was because she had 'bubbles on the brain', British slang for being a moron.
TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
I know. I was laughing in my chair when I was rereading what we were typing. :D
Thanks for agreeing on the muffin thing. I didn't see that saddlebag. I'd better double check.
Oh yeah. I was thinking why Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoons cutie marks weren't really talents but personalities.
I think the doctor is better with Cloudkicker anyhow. I even drew a picture of it. [link] That's a good point about Derpy's cutie mark though.

By the way, the artwork done here is really good and I love the story idea that ViralJP has already put on the internet. Discord returning and the main 6 turning into fillies is just adorable. And I still can't get over how cute it is how Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy still remember each other when their memory is blacked out because they did know each other as fillies.
SparklySapphire291 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
baby derpy hooves.... d'aaaaaaaw
XxBlue-ThunderxX Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student General Artist
its my little alicorn all over again
Tempest-Star Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
baby celestia = DAWWWWWWWWW!
Silvermoonthewolf Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-poor derpy-
RainbowDash3221XD Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lirachiu Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the older sisters turned into babies and start eating the younger sisters manes ^u^ cccuuutttee
johannchristopherg9 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Artist
I like that kind of stuff!
AdistroughtWOLF Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
put this on TV and I will throw my wallet at the screen!!!!!!!!
Hollyleafwolf Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
liemislie21 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
no its celistia
Hollyleafwolf Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Then who is in the background there.... I got a jar of dirt your argument is invalid at all times.
liemislie21 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hollyleafwolf Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats who I meant in the first place T_T
liemislie21 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hollyleafwolf Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
liemislie21 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
cute when I was a baby I do that too sucking my mum's hair
FillyCelestia Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist
Change me back, Discord!
mdsdude3 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Apple Bloom: Oh my gosh! It is her!
Apple Bloom Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle: oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my dog!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!oh my god!
MountainLygon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Call Hasboro! Make this happen!
EqFAzrael Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I will have to read that later.
spikestormify Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
love luna's expression
Needforspeed107 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Cute but its a little furious what Discord did
lyokian Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
When you find the girls you're not going to like the results.
Schnood Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
tear the bag
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw... Would you wook at that?
CraftyRebecca Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
Aww, Cheerilee! :happybounce:
sondash300 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lunar republic anypony?
dlausactor6373 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconderpyscreamplz::iconsaysplz:Release me, mutant bag!!! Have pity!!!
moon-lightning Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well done! Lol
JoeBrony Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
This is awesome!
BB-K Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, I love little Celly sucking on the hair. :)
PonymanXX7 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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