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Discord's Revenge 4 by ViralJP Discord's Revenge 4 by ViralJP
Princess Luna (c) Hasbro
Princess Celestia (c) Hasbro
Apple Bloom (c) Hasbro
Sweetie Belle (c) Hasbro
Scootaloo (c) Hasbro
Cheerilee (c) Hasbro
Derpy Hooves (c) Hasbro
Discord (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
(c) :iconfyre-flye:

After Discord's arrival at the school, Ponyville underwent a drastic change (the same change that occurred when he first made Ponyville fall into chaos). Upon Discord's departure from the school, the Cutie Mark Crusaders went to the school while unaware of the events that have taken place. They found a crying foal in the classroom and soon realized that it was their teacher. They took the helpless foal with them in order to find any pony that could help, but as soon as they left the school the crusaders saw the drastic and unnatural changes made to the town. However, Discord was expecting their arrival at the school, yet decided not to intrude ... for now.

With little Cheerilee alongside them, the crusaders start heading back to town, but the checker board ground and floating houses distracted them. Their reactions to the strange changes to the environment were those of shock, awe, and terror.

Apple Bloom: What happened to Ponyville!?
Sweetie Belle: Maybe some kind of spell did this.
Scootaloo: *carrying Cheerilee* I kind of doubt a spell could do all this mess. Either way, it looks really weird.
Cheerilee: *starts crying* WAAAAAAAA!!!!
Scootaloo: *tries to calm Cheerilee* I just hope we can find some pony who could change Ms. Cheerilee back.
Sweetie Belle: *helps Scootaloo with Cheerilee* Don't worry Ms. Cheerilee, we'll help you some how.
Apple Bloom: *worried* I wish Applejack and them were here. They'd know what to do.

While stumped with their problems, an alicorn suddenly appears before the crusaders. Another alicorn that was small but familiar leaped off the other's back and onto the ground. The crusaders soon noticed who these alicorns are.

Apple Bloom: Princess Luna!
Scootaloo: What are you doing here? *puts Cheerilee down on the ground*
Sweetie Belle: And who's that small pony?
Princess Luna: I'm afraid thy sister has been inflicted by a spell casted upon her. Princess Celestia is but a mere young filly now.
Apple Bloom: Wait! That's Princess Celestia!? *takes a look at Princess Celestia from Luna's side* Oh my gosh! It is her!
Princess Celestia: *starts chewing on Luna's mane again*
Sweetie Belle: Princess Luna, you think that whoever did this to Princess Celestia did the same to Cheerilee?
Princess Luna: It certainly seems that.
Scootaloo: Who did this then? OW! *has her tail chewed on by Cheerilee*
Princess Luna: Discord.
Apple Bloom: Wait a sec, you mean that goofy lookin' statue we saw on our field trip to Canterlot Castle?
Princess Luna: Yes, but thou must know that the one named Discord is not just a statue, but an actual living spirit of disharmony and chaos.
Scootaloo: Oh yeah, Ms. Cheerilee said it was something called a Draconequis or something. OW! *Cheerilee still chewing on Scootaloo's tail*
Sweetie Belle: What do we do now princess?
Princess Luna: Thou must assist me in finding Twilight Sparkle and her friends. With their help and the powers of the elements of harmony, we can defeat Discord and return every pony and everything back to normal.
Apple Bloom: You got it princess!
Sweetie Belle: You can count on us!
Scootaloo: That Discord won't know what's coming to him! OW! *Cheerilee still at Scootaloo's tail*

Not to far away, a young Derpy Hooves flies by with a lunch bag on top of her head. Suddenly, a face appears on the front of the bag. The face that showed up was none other than Discord.

Discord: Well now, looks like there's going to be a new game for the ponies to play really soon. I'll simply wait until they meet with Twilight. After that, the real fun begins.
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ajaxtheemopony Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Again... XD
OkamiJubei Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
*LOLed at Derpy*
aosthfan Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Little sisters become big sisters
pikachulover94 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
awesome and to cute!
Silverumbreon101 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Baby Celestia is so cute Woohooooo! 
Snowpup22 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
yay, derpy!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
So scoots, how does it feel to have your mane being painfully chewed on by your alternate universe sister?
1Elementofhope Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeh, reeeaaaaalllllll good camouflage discord
Metagrossfreak Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Even better: Discord makes Luna, Celestia, and Cadance fillies, thus being too young to rule (like in adventure time). Doctor Whooves and Derpy must lead Equestria with their knowledge of Space-Time and Muffins!
TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the plot how it already is. I also don't understand the fan base developing Derpy when it's Hasbo's job to develop characters.
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