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Discord's Revenge 10 by ViralJP Discord's Revenge 10 by ViralJP
Twilight Sparkle (c) Hasbro
Pinkie Pie (c) Hasbro
Rainbow Dash (c) Hasbro
Fluttershy (c) Hasbro
Discord (c) Hasbro
Tom (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
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Not too long after reuniting with Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle and Fluttershy followed Pinkie to the possible whereabouts of Rainbow Dash. The fillies have less than 40 minutes to beat Discord at his own game. Twilight and her friends believe that they can win with how things are going so far, yet what they don't know is that Discord still has a few tricks up his sleeves.

The little fillies venture in fast pace with no time to waste while Pinkie leads the way towards the mountains.

Twilight Sparkle: Are you sure this is where you last saw Rainbow Dash?
Pinkie Pie: Yup! Sure did! At least that's what I remember anyway, but I Pinkie Promise! *does the Pinkie Pie Promise while running*
Twilight Sparkle: In that case, lead the way Pinkie.
Pinkie Pie: Ookie Doki Loki!
Fluttershy: My goodness, those clouds are really starting to gather close by. *sees numerous clouds going to the mountains*
Twilight Sparkle: It's no doubt that Discord has something planned for us. Be ready for anything everypony!
Fluttershy: Got it!
Pinkie Pie: Yes sir, mame sir!

The three fillies made their way to the top of a tall mountain with some surprising ease, but notice the increase of winds occurring. They see no pony in sight, but then a sudden large crash nearby grabbed their attention.

Fluttershy: Did you hear that!?
Pinkie Pie: Sure did, it was like huge BOOM sound!
Twilight Sparkle: Let's check it out!

They arrived at the small crater where the sound originated from and saw somepony recover from the impact within the center.

Pinkie Pie: Is that?
Fluttershy: OH MY GOSH! IT'S RAINBOW DASH!!!
Rainbow Dash: Uuunggh.

Fluttershy rushes to Rainbow's aid tends to the small bruises on her wings.

Fluttershy: Are you okay Rainbow Dash? *tending to her bruises*
Rainbow Dash: I'm fine fluttershy. It's nothing. *notices both Twilight and Pinkie* Who are these two?
Fluttershy: You don't remember?
Rainbow Dash: I can't say that I've meet these two before.
Twilight Sparkle: Rainbow it's us, Twilight and Pinkie!
Pinkie Pie: Yeah! By the way, what'cha doing all the way up here anyway?
Rainbow Dash: What does it look like? I'm doing so serious training for Junior Flight Academy. I think there might be a real mean tornado showing up anytime now.
Fluttershy: Please don't Rainbow Dash, it's too dangerous!
Rainbow Dash: Come on Fluttershy, I'm not scared of some lame tornado!
Twilight Sparkle: Listen to her Rainbow, she right. We need you to come with us right way. We don't have much time.
Rainbow Dash: I'm not going anywhere! I don't even know you crazy ponies.

Just then a sudden flash blinded the fillies. When they reopened their eyes they saw none other than Discord once more.

Twilight, Pinkie, & Fluttershy: DISCORD!
Discord: Well now, looks like you little ponies have made it more than halfway through my game. But I wouldn't get my hopes up if I were you, because now is when things start to become interesting.
Rainbow Dash: Who's this bozo?
Discord: Oh my, such a poor insult from little miss "RAINBOW CRASH" here!
Rainbow Dash: Grrrrgh, SAY THAT AGAIN! I DARE YA!!!
Discord: Please, no need for hostilities little Dashie. Actually, I'm here to give you a little "help" with that training of yours.
Rainbow Dash: Do your worst! I'm ready for it!
Discord: All right then! *snaps his fingers and disappears*

Suddenly, the clouds began to form a spiral and the winds began to rise up. A tornado began to occur close to the mountain. In mere seconds, the tornado soon took on more wind and became more visible to the fillies.

Twilight Sparkle: Rainbow, this isn't time or place for this. We've got to ...
Rainbow Dash: I'm not backing down because of some jerk! I'm flying into that tornado whether you like it or ...
Fluttershy: AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!

An updraft of wind caught Fluttershy's left wing and pushed her into the tornado.

Twilight, Rainbow, & Pinkie: FLUTTERSHY!!!!

Rainbow Dash immediately flew into the dangerous winds to rescue here friend. The tornado then grew stronger and the wind knocked Pinkie Pie towards the ledge of the cliffside. She was barely hanging onto the cliff while the tornado continued to draw her in closer.

Twilight Sparkle: PINKIE! *rushes to her and grabs hold of her hoof while holding onto a stump branch*

At that moment, both Twilight and Pinkie were both swept into the tornado while still hanging onto the ground which the stump resided upon. Inside the tornado, Rainbow Dash saw other stuff that got swept into the spinning tornado, but no sight of Fluttershy. Twilight and Pinkie were stuck in the terrible typhoon while still hanging onto dear life.

Rainbow Dash: Fluttershy! Fluttershy!!!
Fluttershy: Rainbow!!!

Rainbow Dash spotted Fluttershy within the tornado and rushed to help her.

Rainbow Dash: Hang on Fluttershy!!

At that moment, Discord reappear once more to mock the ponies and belittle Rainbow's efforts.

Discord: AHHAAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Oh this is too rich! Just be sure not to mess up Rainbow Crash!
Rainbow Dash: *ignores Discords insult and concentrates on rescuing Fluttershy*
Fluttershy: AAAHHHH!!!!
Rainbow Dash: Almost there! *grabs Fluttershy's hoof* Gotcha!
Fluttershy: Rainbow!
Rainbow Dash: Don't worry Fluttershy! I'm right here!
Fluttershy: But how do we get out of here?
Twilight Sparkle: Rainbow! Fluttershy! Over here!!!

The two pegasi ponies fly towards Twilight and Pinkie Pie while still enduring the harsh weather.

Twilight Sparkle: Everypony stay close! *conjures magic from here horn*

Twilight creates a large magical bubble that encloses around the four fillies. The bubble then gets swept outward and out of the center of the tornado and back onto the ground. The bubble slowly disappears and the fillies felt disoriented. At that moment, both Twilight and Pinkie recover in seconds and go to their friends to assist them.

Pinkie Pie: Rainbow? Heeellloooo? *trying to wake up an unconscious Dashie*
Fluttershy: Ungh... Twilight? *sees Twilight while still a bit dizzy*
Twilight Sparkle: Thank Celestia that you two are okay.
Fluttershy: What about Rainbow Dash?
Twilight Sparkle: I'll see what I can do.
Pinkie Pie: Hey look! That tornado is gone! *sees that the tornado is nowhere in sight*
Twilight Sparkle: Pinkie, let me see Rainbow really quick.

Without further wait, Twilight used her horn and casted the same spell that she did for Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie. She aimed her now glowing horn towards the still unconscious blue pegasus. The spell was now taking effect as Rainbow Dash's mind was refilled with the forgotten memories and experiences that she once knew. Also her cutie mark reappeared as well. However, unbeknownst to the other fillies, Twilight took in more pain as a recoil in casting the spell because of her now smaller body. The pain was more intense as she yelled once the spell had finished. She dropped onto her legs and began breathing hard because of the exhaustion of casting such a powerful spell.

Pinkie & Fluttershy: TWILIGHT!
Twilight Sparkle: It's ... It's fine. I just need to catch my breath.
Rainbow Dash: Uuuugh.
Twilight, Pinkie, & Fluttershy: Rainbow Dash!
Pinkie Pie: How ya feeling?
Rainbow Dash: Fine I guess, what a sec. Where's Discord!? I still gotta teach him a lesson for turning me to a little filly!
Discord: As much as I'd love to see you try, you fillies still have a game to play.

The delinquent draconequis showed up in front of the small ponies while reclining on his cloud. He giggled to himself while looking upon the four fillies.

Discord: Bravo my little ponies! Bravo! You four put in a rather hilarious and entertaining show back there.
Twilight Sparkle: *recovering from the spell* Two more ponies to go Discord and then we reach the statue in Ponyville. After that, you have to keep your promise and turn back to stone.
Discord: Very true Twilight, provided that you accomplish your part within the time remaining. Which reminds me, *looks at a wrist-watch* looks like you four now have less 20 minutes to find your remaining friends and make contact with the statue, AND COUNTING!
Rainbow Dash: No sweat! I know where to find Applejack! So in your face Discord!
Discord: Now now Dashie, don't make me use this. *pulls out the hourglass*
Rainbow Dash: Why you!
Twilight Sparkle: Rainbow! Let's not waste anymore time!
Rainbow Dash: Alright then, follow my lead!

Rainbow Dash took the lead and the other ponies followed. She led in a moderate pace instead of going in her normally fast rate in order to stay close with her friends.

Discord: I'll be seeing you fillies very shortly MMWWAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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:icongummy10020:
gummy10020 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
why do flutter shy seems taller then the rest
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
WHat's the finale? Does Discord end up turned into a baby as payback?
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pikachulover94 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
I cant give a proper critique but I love this story and Discord he's so awesome good or bad.
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lunalovemoon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
more please?
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keiram04 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student Artist
rainbows cutie mark is blank while the rest of them have cutie marks LOL :iconrainbowdashlolplz:
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DerpyHoovesTheLoved Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uhh not be rude but fluttershy's wings are a bit too big if that was intended please tell me why ^^
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siggie740 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
Fluttershy's wings are big because she's the oldest of the mane 6
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DerpyHoovesTheLoved Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohh very clever :3 I take my comment away ^^
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xXIceblastofRCXx Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm scared about Twilight....
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:iconpony-licious101:
Pony-licious101 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Artist
luv this! :D
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L-coco Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Artist
I don't mean to be rude, but when can we expect to see part 11
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Doublesims Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you should really write a story about this and not just in your comments but a real one. ;P it's really good
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TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
This would take place before "Keep clam and Flutter On".
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Spartan545 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Princess Luna is now found a way to stop Discord for good. She has to summon the Giants to from Skylands and bring them to Equestria. Because of her status as a Portal Master, she can easily use the Portal of Power to summon the Giants. Discord facing the Giants...

Tree Rex: You don't think you can get your revenge that easily, do ya?

Discord: *stutters*

Bouncer: Yeah, thats ridiculous!

Discord: G...G...Giants...in MY...game!

Tree Rex:*grabs Discord* Its our game now, Goat-Face.

Bouncer: And you made this place seem a lot like Skylands.
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Creamandcheese1 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
write a fanfic!!! BTW, where's RD's Cutie mark?
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ShadowNinetails Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
RD didn't have a Cutie Mark at that point because Twilight didn't restore her memory yet.
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gamemaster19863 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
When is the next chapter?
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Rainbowdash2Pony Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And Rarity :/
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2Ppinkiepie Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
rarity is probably hiding behind tom
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eba256love Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
LOL
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Rainbowdash2Pony Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wheres applejack?
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inugou Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:thumbsup:
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Kovu96 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This seems like a decent idea for Discord's revenge. If he can't mess with their friendship through the effects of a maze and his "Master of Puppets" specialty, then messing with time, would be more effective for him. I wonder if they'll ever bring back Discord in the series. He's clever, intelligent, manipulative, and deceiving, like Scar from "Lion King" or Caius Cassius from Shakespeare's "Julius Caesar".
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JoeBrony Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Awesome chapter :thumbsup:
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
And then Applejack Saved the Day because Best pony!
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is too cute! Dashie rescuing her little sister in the tornado!
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mdsdude3 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
Discord: Oh my, such a poor insult from little miss "RAINBOW CRASH" here!
Rainbow Dash: Grrrrgh, SAY THAT AGAIN! I DARE YA!!!
discord:are you threatening me my little Dashie.
rainbow dash:nooooooooooooo i was asking you nicely THIS IS THREATENING YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!!!! *gets ready to Fight* eaher you take that back or i'll ues you'er butt as the next podesual o TIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMME!!!!!!!
YOU GOT THAT!!!!!!
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Blackwind06 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Another sweet page my friend
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Thank you kindly.
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Blackwind06 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
no prob
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Jdueler11 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
About time.
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GlitchyProductions Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing story as usual, keep up the good work. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Thanks a bunch.
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Richforce Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Great job, nice to see a new chapter and artwork.
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Thanks a bunch.
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catz537 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
adorablee i love this x3 they all look so cute!
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ShaD-23 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
I hope Twilight is okay by the end of this... what happens if she uses up all her magic? Will she become an Earth pony? While she not be able to use her Element of Harmony when the time comes? Will other ponies have to stand in for them and use the elements in their place? (if so, I think Apple Bloom could use loyalty) This is getting good. Discord looks like he might actually win... I (occasionally) love it when a bad guy wins...
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
She's not going to turn into an Earth pony through using up her magic. Twilight will eventually face a pretty heavy toll once she and her friends reach the final part of Discord's twisted game.
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ShaD-23 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
I eagerly await
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cookooface Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
This is such a great story, I love it
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Thank you.
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Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Awesome pic and story:thumbsup:
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:iconviraljp:
ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Thank you kindly.
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Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
You're welcome:thumbsup:
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EricTheWhitelion Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Discord loves come Chaos does he
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
The CREEPY part is? How the memories and actions of theirs when they're fill before Twilight uses her spell are just . . . GONE.
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
It's definitely a scary thought, especially in cases such as the other ponies who won't be getting the spell treatment. I think you've mentioned one part of the story in particular being Granny Smith's memory loss along with her de-aging. That's one scary and sorrowful example to think about.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Let me rephrase that.

Their actions while they're de-aged are COMPLETELY FORGOTTEN it like they're simply ERASED. It's like when Cheerilee doesn't remember her actions while enchanted by the love poison. That cheap and ultimately UNNEEDED plot device in a setting where there is no mascurqade to keep hidden become horror when you realize you've got a perfect memory erasure.

Basically they fillies they were after Discord zapped them DIED when Twilight restored her adult minds.
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Josiah-Shockency-JCS Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Hey, with him, he makes this show ONGOING!!!! XD
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ViralJP Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
It's kind of like a roller-coaster ... OF CHAOS!!!
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